I can't find anything wrong with it. Yes it's dark, but it's cool =) Extensive use of ink amazes me(for some reason, I don't like to use a lot of dark ink, and I know I need to change that)
You did these on that horrible paper? Impressive!Drat-the Pond picture didn't come through on my computer.
I like these a lot, especially the one on the left. I find it a very powerful image.
I really like the way the one on the left looks like you just drew the light. Well done on both of these!
I like these strong portraits
Nice job. I like the dark. Very bold and strong piece.